For this piece, I chose the song, "Lessons Learned" by Matt & Kim. A part in the lyrics in the song goes, "Tape holds things that can not stick and keep leftovers in the fridge. While lessons learned go down the drain, I can't believe everything. And all the bad names gone and the good ones were all wrong." I decided to use this section as the main theme for the image. I used the drain and water representing the lessons learned as mentioned in the song.
I really liked the idea of the design, but I felt like the execution could've been better. I wish I would've added more detail and colors to make the flow of the water more extreme and clearly shown. I feel like this could've improved the feel of the piece.
I think that this is a strong piece. I think that possibly slanting or warping the text to give it a sense of motion could have strengthened it.
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